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Chapter: The Story
Each week, I’m alternating between the two major storylines. I like the new format much better (it’s easier for me to write, and keeps things fresh). We continue where we left Pam two weeks back.
Inks and colors will be posted tomorrow, but I figured you may want to see the penciled roughs earlier. ;) are now up!
-Krishna
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Jose Gonzalez
August 22, 2010 at 1:41 pmThanks for sharing, Krishna. Examining the rough is a great way to learn. For some reason, I’m seeing these as a mix of construction lines, with gesture lines. The “tilt” kind of goes with the emotion, and I’m sure you know what I mean, because they’re yours :) – thanks again.
Jake Eskel
August 23, 2010 at 10:38 amIs it just me, or did the punch line change while being inked? Great comic, though!
Krishna
August 23, 2010 at 1:43 pmGood eye, Jake!
It did – I had Nestle say “Boys,” to make it clear that he was talking to the film crew, not Pam. :)