Assignment 2 Critique: Barry
I’ve taken Barry’s action poses and applied my visual notes (in black). The main suggestion I have for Barry is to draw through the form using volume and to avoid …
Assignment 2 Critique: Kyndra
Last week I discussed the flour sack and how it can be used to convey the torso in action poses. I prepared an assignment for my apprentices to practice their …
Mentor Experiment: Oskar van Velden Critique
Above is my critique of Oskar van Velden’s three drawings. Bigger versions of his illustrations can be found on his Tumblr blog. Click on the image above to see my …
