Hello!! the story is good, but it might be time to speed it up… it doesn’t suit a comic strip when it tries to appear like a comic.
really, don’t want to be rude, just giving my point as an old reader…
Thanks, Conk! The story will be wrapping up soonish. Just have a few more “points” to make. :)
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conk
December 13, 2012 at 8:34 amHello!! the story is good, but it might be time to speed it up… it doesn’t suit a comic strip when it tries to appear like a comic.
really, don’t want to be rude, just giving my point as an old reader…
Krishna Sadasivam
December 13, 2012 at 9:13 amThanks, Conk! The story will be wrapping up soonish. Just have a few more “points” to make. :)