When I remove Bob’s dialogue from panel 4, the entire subtext of the strip changes. (It still works, I think) ;)
-Krishna
It still works, it comes across now as he wants her to move it instead of him. I like the original myself with the destination of where he wants to move it being the issue versus the box itself, but that’s just me.
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tmcelmurry
May 17, 2011 at 9:33 amIt still works, it comes across now as he wants her to move it instead of him. I like the original myself with the destination of where he wants to move it being the issue versus the box itself, but that’s just me.