Here’s an early sneak peek of PC Weenies: Volume 2! Now that the cover is complete, I’ll be putting together the interior pages of the book.
-Krishna
Here’s a 2nd version based on some helpful feedback from my Twitter buddies. Thoughts?
Here’s a third version with the Olive jar.
Here’s version 4 with the logo behind the characters:
and version 5 with the text larger:
Taking into account composition and focus:
And some final touches:
Kevin Rubin
June 22, 2011 at 7:48 pmPretty cool… The only problem is Milton is the one most tightly covering his eyes from the horror, but he’s also directly behind Grandpa, so wouldn’t see it anyway…
Is there more detail on what’s blocked on the mustard jar?
Krishna
June 22, 2011 at 10:57 pmThe positioning of Milton would change the composition, so I’m going with the fact that he’s cringing in anticipation based on what Grampa’s about to do. The mustard jar says “Belch’s” instead of “French’s” and the texture is “earth-stained yellow”.
Dave Bergschneider
June 24, 2011 at 1:38 pmI have to say I like version 5 the most because it shows some real depth. The compositions afterwards are just a little too visually overwhelming by being crowded in my opinion and loses the depth of the first. Just my opinion. I do like the flung/hanging ketchup on the bottom the front though.