The story-telling experiment continues…
Thanks for continuing to indulge me.
You aren’t seeing things. I went back and tightened the dialogue in the last panel.
I felt the wording was a little awkward. It’s the same basic meaning, but I felt it was not delivered as clearly as it is now…
This is the best set of strips I have been reading since the comic went multipanel! Please continue with the adventures of Bob and his Pappy for a few more weeks at least!
thanks, John. I was quite concerned with how these comics would be received. The silence from the vast majority was deafening, and I felt like somehow I wasn’t delivering the goods.
I like your experiment. It’s been good reading. And viewing.
Just remember that when people like something, they’ll rarely say anything about it. But if they hate it, you’ll hear no end of the complaints.