Each week, I’m alternating between the two major storylines. I like the new format much better (it’s easier for me to write, and keeps things fresh). We continue where we left Pam two weeks back.
Inks and colors will be posted tomorrow, but I figured you may want to see the penciled roughs earlier. ;) are now up!
-Krishna













Thanks for sharing, Krishna. Examining the rough is a great way to learn. For some reason, I’m seeing these as a mix of construction lines, with gesture lines. The “tilt” kind of goes with the emotion, and I’m sure you know what I mean, because they’re yours :) – thanks again.
Is it just me, or did the punch line change while being inked? Great comic, though!
Good eye, Jake!
It did – I had Nestle say “Boys,” to make it clear that he was talking to the film crew, not Pam. :)